Wednesday, October 31, 2007
Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Thursday, October 25, 2007
Dear Reader,
In the essay you are bout to read is about why I think I will be graduating in 2011. I chose this essay because I felt that I did well on introduction/conclusion and sentence structure. I think that i did well on intro/conclusion because I have a good hook which starts my introduction paragraph off. Also in my conclusion paragraph I address the so what, which is when you end you essay with a question for the reader. I think that this essay has good sentence structure which means that none of my sentences run on or incomplete.
What makes you think that you will be graduating in 2011?
The high school dropout rate among minorities is very high. The reason why I am going to be graduating in 2011 is because I feel that CHS provides better education than most school. Also CHS has a better environment. I feel that in 2011 I will meet all of the requirements that are needed.
CHS provides better education than most schools. In CHS the students and teachers come to learn new things. In some schools children are forced to come to school by there parents. In CHS children are not being forced to come to school. They do so on their own because they feel that education is important.
The environment of CHS is good. You have many historical cites by our school such as Independence Hall. Many schools aren’t named after places, there names after people. Well CHS is named after the Nation Constitution Center. The majority of the things we learn about comes from the constitution.
In 2011, I will meet all of the requirements. When you reach the 12th grade you will have to have to have a certain amounts of credits. The credits would come from your previous years grades added all up together.
In conclusion, I feel that I will be graduating in 2011. All of my requirements will be met. I would be in a good environment and I would have excellent grades. So do you think you will be graduating in 2011?
CHS provides better education than most schools. In CHS the students and teachers come to learn new things. In some schools children are forced to come to school by there parents. In CHS children are not being forced to come to school. They do so on their own because they feel that education is important.
The environment of CHS is good. You have many historical cites by our school such as Independence Hall. Many schools aren’t named after places, there names after people. Well CHS is named after the Nation Constitution Center. The majority of the things we learn about comes from the constitution.
In 2011, I will meet all of the requirements. When you reach the 12th grade you will have to have to have a certain amounts of credits. The credits would come from your previous years grades added all up together.
In conclusion, I feel that I will be graduating in 2011. All of my requirements will be met. I would be in a good environment and I would have excellent grades. So do you think you will be graduating in 2011?
Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Science Project: Nanotechnology
In science class we had to complete a project on nanotechnology. I chose to be the biomedical engineer. The biomedicals engineers job was to first decide what your teams iChip was going to look like. Also had to ecide what part of the brain your iChip will be placed in. Our group place the ihip in the cereburm because it does all of the thinking and its the largest part of the brain. I had to name the functions and purpose of our iChip. Everyone in the group had to come up with the company name and our logo.
Thursday, October 11, 2007
Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
Advantages: You can find any type of data in any subject on the internet. Also the internet has many types of websites that are educational for children. For adults, there are websites for them to you can look for jobs, purchasing tickects for special invents, and banking, and making reservations to different hotels.
Disadvantaages: Don't always think that the internet is always good. On the internet there are bad things to such as theives, who like to steal your identity. Certain websites can give your computer a virus. Also there are many pornigraphic sites that can be found easily by children.
http://www.buzzle.com/articles/advantages-disadvantages-internet.html
Disadvantaages: Don't always think that the internet is always good. On the internet there are bad things to such as theives, who like to steal your identity. Certain websites can give your computer a virus. Also there are many pornigraphic sites that can be found easily by children.
http://www.buzzle.com/articles/advantages-disadvantages-internet.html
Tuesday, October 9, 2007
My Philosophy of Government
I felt that government was necessary in a society. It is necessary because people should have limitations. I agreed with Locke because he believed that government was necessary. He said that government would protect the rights of people and people would act reasonable towards the government.
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