Dear Reader,

In the essay you are bout to read is about why I think I will be graduating in 2011. I chose this essay because I felt that I did well on introduction/conclusion and sentence structure. I think that i did well on intro/conclusion because I have a good hook which starts my introduction paragraph off. Also in my conclusion paragraph I address the so what, which is when you end you essay with a question for the reader. I think that this essay has good sentence structure which means that none of my sentences run on or incomplete.